You look nice today

The sign at the entrance to the park always brightens my morning. Spray painted. Cream streaks down the rusting metal to a smile. You look nice today. Amazing how something like that can produce a grin. Even on the wettest Thursday morning.

Lucy can’t see the sign from where she’s standing. She’s bent double over the bin behind it. Fighting to breathe. Brian has a better view. It’s not making him smile though. In spite of the sunshine. His face contorts as I pass. He can barely manage a grunt. I didn’t want to speak to him anyway. Lucy seems on the verge of a full-blown asthma attack. All he’s bothered about is meeting the dealer on time.

To be fair, it would be all she cared about too. If oxygen hadn’t suddenly become a major issue. We exchange pleasantries. Nebulisers. F***ing useless inhalers. She doesn’t want to talk any more than he does. She’s just too polite to say so. I go on my way. Suppressing the thought that crack cocaine probably isn’t all that good for asthma. Slightly ashamed of my self-righteousness.

I felt threatened when the drinkers first moved in on the space under the railway bridge. Replacing the enormous crocheted doily that hung there briefly last summer. I seriously considered changing my route. Not for long. For a start, I’m more or less invisible to them by the time they’re half way down the first can. And anyway, why should I be intimidated? I’ve as much right as they have to enjoy this oasis of green space between the M32 and Stapleton Road. Why let them drive me out to walk along a street once called the most dangerous in Britain by a well-known national newspaper? Oh, and a lawless hellhole by another.

Funny how a place can get such a reputation. OK, it’s not the loveliest part of our green and pleasant land. There’s no doubt some dodgy stuff happens here. A lot of it in plain view. It definitely doesn’t look nice. Today or any other day. But a lawless hellhole? That’s taking it a bit far.

I fell in love with this city about eleven years ago. I was living in a small Wiltshire town back then. I came to work in an inner-city primary school. I had no idea you could suffer culture shock barely thirty miles from where you’ve lived for more than half your life. When I eventually moved here a couple of years later one of my colleagues wrote in my ‘new home’ card. Home is where the heart is. Yours has been here for some time. Welcome home.

A few months after I moved in, Tony Blair came to visit. Not me. Bristol. It was a hot afternoon. Getting towards the end of the summer term. I was lugging two large bags of shopping home from Tesco’s when I noticed three people loitering outside Lloyd’s Bank. With a TV camera. They saw me. Homed in. I’m not sure what they expected. Whatever it was, they didn’t get it.

“Living round here, I expect you worry about going out after dark.”

“Of course I do. I’m a woman. I’d have to be careful wherever I lived.”

“And you’d prefer to live somewhere nicer of course.”

“No. I love it here.”

I watched their faces fall as the interview progressed. Downhill. I wasn’t giving them anything they wanted. Despite the leading questions. Needless to say, I didn’t make my debut on breakfast TV the following morning. They lost interest. Switched off the camera. Walked away without so much as a ‘thank you’.

At first glance there’s nothing much looks nice about this part of the city. Rubbish in the gutter. Run-down shops. Broken people. All too easy to run with the image. Especially if you’re a journalist in search of easy prey. I recognise one of the men under the bridge. He doesn’t see me of course. As I said. I’m invisible. Except to the sign by the entrance. He doesn’t look nice today. He’s staring at a can. Too weary to hate it properly. He’ll be in the community café later. Coffee and a toasted sandwich. Not much of a life. Lawless for sure. Hellish too. Quite likely dangerous once upon a time. Who knows? Later, he’ll be cracking jokes in the café. The mask back in place. Trying to look nice. Right now, he’s just plain human.


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